tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7216480666713584443.post7624887767520142259..comments2012-05-15T10:48:58.582-07:00Comments on Jack's Blog: Childhood Obesity: The Blame GameJack Windmoellerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04234039317725867074noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7216480666713584443.post-71602905672437580692012-05-15T10:48:58.582-07:002012-05-15T10:48:58.582-07:001.) Does the essay make a clear argument? Yes_X_ N...1.) Does the essay make a clear argument? Yes_X_ No____ <br /><br /><br />2.) Find on sentence that you think best describes the thesis of the blog essay. <br /><br />"To wane this plague and protect future American generations from health risks and constraints, we must nationally establish a renewed mentality of personal fitness and proper nutrition." <br /><br />3.) Does the article clearly identify a problem so that the reader understands who was involved, what happened, where it happened, when and why?<br /><br />Yes the article is specific to identify what the problem is, why the problem exists, and possible solutions to the problem.<br /><br />4.) Does the article provide plenty of level-1 abstractions to support their argument?<br /><br />The essay had several level 1 abstractions to help support their argument, and allows the reader to really think of how important of an issue obesity is in our society. <br /><br /><br />5.) Are there any images or video in the essay? If so, are the significances of all videos and images clearly explained in the essay? <br /><br />There are several images that help with the "flow" of the essay, and allow the reader to have a greater understanding of the problem.<br /><br /><br />6.) Are their any claims in the essay that you are skeptical of? <br /><br />I was not skeptical of any of the claims in the essay, the only thing that I would add is the responsibility of teens to prevent obesity. <br /><br />7.) Are the aspects of the essay that you found to be very interesting or effective? <br /><br />The facts of Physical Education in school was very interesting, and got me thinking about how absurd it is that 22% of schools do not have mandatory PE.Tommy's Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08531495301019210604noreply@blogger.com